Sin and Sentience

This wasn't actually on the list of song ideas I had initially sketched out. I was walking home from work and it sort of jumped out and smacked me in the face. I like the idea a lot, but I'm not 100% sold on the implementation right now.

The idea behind this song comes from a Frank Herbert novel. (Not one of the Dune novels.) In the novel it is explored in the context of artificial intelligence. I took it a decidedly different direction.

It currently uses the same hymn-song as "A Tribe of Boy Piggies". That was unintentional, as it turned out I failed to note the meter/song used by "Piggies" in my list-o-meters.

I've been having trouble finding quiet to record vocal tracks. I had to rush to finish what I've got. As a result, the vocals are more imperfect than usual.

The album concept (repeated from my bio): This FAWM, I want to write songs for an art album I'm working on. Abstractly, it's an art album about copyright... in the guise of hymn filk. The premise is a lonely space traveler thinks about what might be in store for the colony ship when they get there, but due to copyright restrictions only music made before 1926 is available on-board. So, he combines the two.

Meter: 8-7-8-7-7-8-7-4

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Sin and Sentience

Date

2015-02-15 @ 04:10pm

Lyrics

(What if the higher-ups believe that sin is required for sentience?)

A planet peaceful, fair and just.
A kind and loving folk, check.
Lacking even words for sins,
we'd treat them as beasts or less
and they would forgive the harm.

We would not know where to begin.
Without sin and sentience
Sin and sentience

Our cities careless displacement.
Servile they will comply, check.
Meanwhile our priests seek salvation.
They only need to teach sin.
The fruit offered rots within.

We should know not to play with sin.
Knowing pain and sentience
Sin and sentience

And sin, once taught, never quite leaves.
Acknowledgement of peers, check.
What of peers without great losses?
Reciprocal bargains played.
Trustless treaties meaning naught.

We would not know where to begin.
With both sin and sentience
Sin and sentience

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FAWM 2015

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Filk to Hymntunes


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